I'm attracted to this drawing for many reasons: the composition, the story telling quality, and the expressive interaction of the characters. I love the details, the shoes hanging on the wires, the net stockings, the sagging pants, variety of hair styles, etc.
We see a sophisticated observation of an adult lifestyle depicted in child-like simplicity. My only negative reaction is that the urban snapshot seems full of stereotypes. Where is the brother or sister with a book-bag on the way to school? Bottom line - you have a wonderful gift for story telling - keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.